I always enjoy pony art that's different than the usual show style or vectoring, recoloring and such. And yours is no exception.
One of the first things that strike me as soon as I look at this drawing is how precise and correctly proportioned the lute is. I've seen many drawings of ponies and people holding instruments, playing them, etc. But only a few get the proportions right. Being a musician myself, I always enjoy when people represent instruments correctly on art. Heck, even the number of frets and strings is right! Fantastic.
But since I can't just candy coat this and only say positive things, I advice you to pau more attention to tjhe outline and colors bleeding. The outline is blured at some points in the tail. Also, the color is bleeding at some spots, particularly between the pony's legs.
One thing I'll always advise is that you should sign every art you do, specially on a place that makes it difficult for removing using editing. Unfortunately, a part of brony community is famous for stealing other people's arts and claiming as their own, recoloring ,etc.
Congrats, you got ticket for this work in group. This is gift for all quality works in our group which have not some badge. Congrats, your work will stay in our group and we will advertise it as best we can.
One of the first things that strike me as soon as I look at this drawing is how precise and correctly proportioned the lute is. I've seen many drawings of ponies and people holding instruments, playing them, etc. But only a few get the proportions right. Being a musician myself, I always enjoy when people represent instruments correctly on art. Heck, even the number of frets and strings is right! Fantastic.
But since I can't just candy coat this and only say positive things, I advice you to pau more attention to tjhe outline and colors bleeding. The outline is blured at some points in the tail. Also, the color is bleeding at some spots, particularly between the pony's legs.
One thing I'll always advise is that you should sign every art you do, specially on a place that makes it difficult for removing using editing. Unfortunately, a part of brony community is famous for stealing other people's arts and claiming as their own, recoloring ,etc.
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