hmm, it's not finished to me, it needs.....something.
"this is nightly in his younger days, he was a soldier of the lunar rebellion in the 1st equestran war against the changelings back then. luna, back then was sealed in the moon but her soldiers swore never to fight under Celestia's banner... on a cold winters night our hero lies exhausted in the snow with the sound of war trembling."
i'll change the snow texture maybe, and also lessen the moonlit glow effect. give me some tips plz?